i love that look on your face, this totally reminds me of an early 70s playboy shot type thing, if not Marilyn-esque the lighting is very cool and smart too. anyway you look very gorgeous, and i totally get the 'character' thing, you definitely seem like you're channeling someone else with that pouty movie star look on your face.
by the way this one hundred word minimum thing is quite the odd thing, one cannot write a solid to-the-point critique in less than one hundred words? i hereby disagree with this b s silly requirement. yep. totally disagree... with... it.
i would say unfair in the point that how you read the image is not close to what i was getting at at all.
look, i'm not a master photographer, i'm just a photog/model follower for like 10 yrs who's had a ton of gfs who model and got sucked-into the whole 'world' of it all even though i myself don't DO it. so yes i'm probably going to miss a lot of deep artistic meanings since i didn't go to photog school in california and never had photography offered in my h.s. BUT as someone who follows a ton of A1 photogs and models and has seen thousands and thousands of pics, i trust my keen eye as far as knowing what is 'good/great' vs 'bad.' (SHRUG) again with you I was just trying to be supportive. i guess i just shouldn't of said anything.
i have one thing to say unrelated to the comment and more to the way you go about things. have more confidence. you shy away from what you think for reasons i don't understand. you have no need to justify why what you say is supportive or not, nor do you have to second guess if you have enough background to leave a comment. If i can tell you how to do one thing is stop thinking somethign is not worth saying and never think just because one person says one thing what you said might not be right! Just speak your mind!
if you're referring to the bra straps on the back thing, i held back simply because i didn't wanna poopoo on a person that I like's art that seemingly meant a lot to them, that's all. it's like if a girl looks super cute yet you spy a TINY zit, or nose hair hanging out haha (etc) would you point that out in real life and make them feel bad? i wouldn't...unless i knew them really really well and we 'fuck around' with ultra honest shit to each other all the time like that...cause i guess i see you as more of a friend than just A model. anyway, just give me my C- and i'll be on my way professor...and i'll try to do better next time (btw since i had my 'heart event' in march, i really use DA as mostly a happy DISTRACTION more than anything else, to distract me n chill me out, fyi, deary.)